Marie, Queen of the Seas
Somewhere in this world, there exists seas separated by barriers of crystal. The seas are so cold that one can feel its chilly atmosphere from the other side of these enclosures. Each sea had a distinct color, smell, and taste. For example, the murky, brown sea resembles the taste of coffee, while the transparent, yellow sea hinted the fragrance of Calamansi and the sweetness of honey. A sip from any of these seas is said to bring forth rejuvenation to the drinker’s body.
These seas are ruled by a queen. There is a flood whenever she sends more water cascading from her jug. Hailstones the size of glaciers fall from the sky when she feels that the water is not cold enough. The glaciers collide with each other when her mighty curved scepter moves across the waters. She also offers a portion of any sea under her domain for a price.
Would you believe that she is only eighteen years old?
From her province of Cagayan, she travels to Manila in search of opportunities. She never expected that she would become a ruler of the seas. Even with this already daunting task, she is still in the constant pursuit for knowledge. She balances her aristocratic duties with her academics, as she is taking her fourth year in high school. She once dreamed of becoming a nurse, wearing the white uniform and becoming one of the most vital parts of a hospital. But today, she aspires to be able to give a different kind of service. She dreams of acquiring a degree in hotel and restaurant management. She might even own her own restaurant someday. She has also acquired a fancy for technical drawing, as she thinks that she has a talent for drawing precise lines, circles, and other geometrical figures required for the task. She believes that her life is a blessing from God, and should not be put to waste. She also believes that her life’s purpose is to find and accomplish the mission given to her by her Creator. Apart from all of this, she also takes time to enjoy life, attending parties hosted by friends, relatives, and family. The Juzi Juiz stand in Gonzaga Hall’s cafeteria is this queen’s domain. With a ladle as her scepter and a hairnet as her crown, she serves her customers with zeal and compassion. She is Marie Pilar.
Like Marie Pilar,
- I am a student.
- I am eighteen years old.
- I dream of finishing college.
- my favorite waffle in waffle time is belgian chocolate.
- my favorite juice flavor in juzi juiz is calamansi with honey.
- I value education.
- time management is one of my biggest problems.
- I believe that life is a blessing from God.
- I have
lo… It’s complicated. - I wanted to be a doctor when I was a kid. (It’s almost the same as being a nurse, right?)
Unlike Marie Pilar,
- I am not from Cagayan
- I was never really good at technical drawing, nor any kind of drawing for that matter.
- I am not a high school student anymore.
- I am not planning to take up HRM anytime soon.
- I usually don’t enjoy parties.
- I am not a working student.
- I am more financially stable than Marie
- I do not believe that we already have a set purpose in life. I think that we create our purpose.
- I have more time in my hands than Marie.
- I do not handle my time management problems as well as Marie. (hence, this long overdue post)
I believe that being able to get a glimpse of her life poses a challenge to me. If I thought that I had a busy schedule, what more her schedule - a giant juggling act between work, school, among other things? If she is able to accomplish a feat like that, why can’t I? I think that it is amazing how she is able to sum up enough discipline and self-control in order to attend to both school and work. I wonder how she never seems to run out of energy?
Marie, Queen of the Seas | time management said,
February 27, 2008 at 2:11 pm
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Superman said,
February 28, 2008 at 11:18 pm
Summary:
First, Rodney talks about what kind of job Marie has. Then, he reveals her age, her hometown, past aspirations (being a nurse), aspirations today (HRM), and the kind of life she now leads. Marie balances being a student, and an employee. Rodney also tells of Marie’s skill in drawing, her beliefs as a Catholic, and finally introduces the location and the name of Marie. Then Rodney enumerates his characteristics that are similar to Marie and those that are not similar. After that, a short reflection.
Assessment:
a. This entry is kind of late, but well written nonetheless, it was pretty creative and interesting, which shows that there was thought and effort out into the entry.
b. The entry was very well organized, the flow was easy to follow. The format was also followed.
c. The topics were interesting enough. The way Rodney related juices to seas were was fun. The reflection does make me want to think about how tough other people’s lives are, specially the life of an 18 year old fourth year high school student who works for a meager salary.
Jean Grey said,
February 29, 2008 at 2:23 am
The entry was about an eighteen- year old girl working for the juzi juiz stand in the admu cafeteria. As an eighteen year-old girl, she doesn’t have a high school diploma yet, but amazingly, she is a working student. Moreover, Marie, although busy with work, is revealed in the entry as a talented girl, capable of dreaming and reaching for her dreams. Then, the author enumerates their similarities and dissimilarities, plus a short insight regarding these.
This is very early for the third post. (hahahahaha)
I really waited for this post you know, and iwas already complaining
Anyway, I really like the way Marie’s job was described by the author. The juice as a sea and Marie as a Queen, was very nice and very creative. Obviusly, the writer really showed great effort in making this entry, and the descriptions were really well-thought of.
(Is this the reason why it was so late? joke!!!!! Anyway, it was worth the wait)
The organization was very nice. There was an element of surprise, especially her age and that she was a high school working student. Not revealing the information all at once was nice, so i can say that the organization was nice. The flow was very smooth.
The topic was interesting, and it was even made more interesting with the descriptions and complex modifiers used. The entry was very very nice.